why hello there!
why hello there!
yo!!! glad to see you here
peaceful loop you have there. i don't know how would it loop in game since it's more of a short song than a functional loop but alright. you should probably put more emphasis on the low end (more specifically on the sub part, your bass is fine ig??) of your mix to make the song more full. i'd also suggest eq-ing that harmonica sound to decrease those high frequencies just a bit, as they're seem to be a bit too "grainy".
surprised you're not scouted yet after uploading audios throughout the years. (maybe it's just newgrounds being weird idk) hopefully you have new stuff to show off tho. scouted!!
Hi man! Thanks so much for taking the time to review my song, means a lot!
Oh yes, I started trying making loops with this one so I still have a lot of things to work on, like you say, the ending and the mixing is something i'm going to be working on. Thanks again for the suggestions and for your words, I'm be happy to take them and work on improving my music :D
OMG i really do love one-hour challenges
that being said, i did not like how you made that sick intro, and decide to blueball me by extending it for so long i just can't >.<
the moment of silence before the beat switch was so jarring it ruined the vibe for me. as for what came after that (1;16-3;20) it was pretty normal tbh. giving me a "nights" vibe by frank ocean. the rims sound pretty weak and seem bitcrushed, maybe try using clearer ones next time you go for a similar vibe?
that being said, good job! and keep at them one hour challenges :DDDD
i guess if it's of any help, the challenges were to make something that sounds like it's from celeste, have at least a half note of complete silence, and have like 2 bpm changes.
thanks for the feedback.
also this is from like 7 months ago haha
solid! maybe make the piano more "piano-ish" at 1;00-1;22 and have it flow a bit more instead of using it just to play chords. also, the crash is a bit loud during the modulation at 2;10. just reduce the volume a little there and ur good to go, keep up the good work btw! :33
Thanks for the comment!
truly beautiful
Thank you very much!
no beep boop bops? :((
nah I couldn't get the samples lol
hmmm really skeptical as to whether this is actually original or not XD. if this isn't and you really stole it, can you give me a link hehe?
but if you really did this tho... the vocal track and instrumental here is pretty solid. it's too dry though, so you might need to add some reverb to them. will expect more from you ;))
I made this. Why skeptical? Thanks for the feedback.
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