-open hats at the beginning were pretty loud (in fact the closed hats were loud as well, you don't want your hats to be too loud tho)
*hey have you tried touching up on music theory yet? the melody at the drop felt pretty dissonant ngl
+that being said, i did liked the melody tho
-try adding a bassline to ur song. makes your songs sound more fuller that way! (cause ur song does feel a bit empty tho)
+really liked that you panned those sound effects (y'know that crowd shouting sound effect)
-you could probably do more with ur drums at the drops, use more hihats and percussions at the backbone of the drums.
+that being said, the kick and snare patterns are alright
-i wouldn't recommend leaving empty spaces such as 1;44-1;49 to make a buildup tho. maybe make the lead closer to the drop? that'll have much more of an effect
that would be all from me. it's good to see that you're trying. keep grinding ^-^