chiptami's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[MEADOWS]

hey, this isn't half bad for what it is! i really love the simple and sweet melody in this song and also the ideas you're trying to convey in it :o

i'd suggest you to try smoothening those transitions (eg. learning how to make proper fills, white noises and risers) and find out how to mix better (especially drums, i can definitely see your drumwork coming along, just needs better mixing in order to shine out y'know?)

keep on the grind, and you'll get somewhere ;))))

rherdalaezian responds:

Omg thank youuuu
I will take that into account!
(:

[🧀 CHEESE WORLD 🧀]

cheese world

heyopc responds:

Cheese World

[Monday Night Monkin [CLIP]]

SONGS TO LISTEN TO WHILE I HATE MY FUCKING MONDAYS LETS GO

[Chipeezy]

ooo is that reverb or are you using the delay method where you replay the sound but in a lower volume? really dig that hehe

really cute song you got here if i do say so myself! i do feel like some instruments are a bit too dry tho, so maybe a bit of reverb wouldn't hurt. (like the flute at ;30-;35) you could also add a bit more instrumentation at ;52-1;27 to make it more full, it does feel a bit empty with the main melody and the chords only playing there.

otherwise, i like this!! tell your friend some random stranger on ng says good luck on their game! ;)))))

jamethy responds:

Yep I did use a bit of delay

Thank you for your feedback, I agree with you and will try to implement that in my future work

Glad you enjoyed it!

[shutdown]

fnaf man does the funny 100 gecs????????? :flushed:

okay seriously tho this is some great stuff hehe

[Boyfriend from FNF orders food]

bruh the laugh at the end

GoToMyNewAccount responds:

I have dishonored my family. It was supposed to be a sniffle indicating boyfriend was crying. X)

[THE SEER]

**you might want to brush up your dashboard a bit so people won't suspect you for being a fake (like attaching your social medias in your dashboard and making a news post introducing yourself)**

welcome to ng btw! it's a really nice place to share things you've made ^^ (at the very least from my experience) enjoy your stayyyyy

p.s. nice song

[I Will Always Hold Your Hand]

ayyy long song gang wya

i have to say, nice synth design! really do be digging them. you could probably top this all off with a sick bass. (or if you want, just a simple sub bass, this song really does need some bass!)

drums are aight tho, very simple lofi drums. you might want to add some variety and percussions to it for that sweet drumwork. (fills, different drumbeats once in a while, shakers, etc.)

all in all, it's decent in my books. congrats on your new bf tho, hope it's long lasting ;))))

[Blank (Blank Mix)]

did you... just pulled a siivagunner on yourself?

damn bro i don't know what to say man goddamn

Trell13 responds:

lol something like that

[Scherzando in C to C major]

lmao for an idiotic chord progression, this piano piece is pretty decent

MIssionary-music responds:

Thanks! If you wanna try it, I just updated it with music score: https://musescore.com/user/6201266/scores/6641717